יום ראשון, 26 באפריל 2009

the ending

Ivor climbs to the hill with John to see what is happening. He doesn't see anything there, so they go back to the village. When they return to the village, they hear something out there. They go out to see what's happening. They see a big black thing on the dam. They see water coming out from the wall of the dam. Now they know that Ivor's dream has come true. They try to get all the villagers to escape but they don't succeed. The dam bursts and washes all the village away. Everybody dies. Crombie and Pilger escape to China

יום ראשון, 19 באפריל 2009

the plot

My story is about a man who dreams that the dam near his village bursts. A young architect discovers details about the dam and one of them is important: the cement used for the dam's build isn't safe and illegal. After the secret  becomes  known, the architect goes to the village with the man who dreamt about the dam. They save the villagers and the builders go to jail. The climax is when the architect discovers that the cement is illegal and he talks to his boss 

יום שישי, 10 באפריל 2009

the setting

the village


the main country where the story takes place is England. In two places: a lilttle village in Welsh and big city named Cardiff. the village placed near a big dam.Cardiff is a big city far away from the village.




place 1-the dam. the dam is the main thing in the story. The story is about this object




place 2-the village. where the main characters are living, Ivor and Constable Evans.




place 3-Cardiff city. where the other main characters are living, John Farthing and his boss.

יום חמישי, 2 באפריל 2009

The main character

crombie makes the cement's deal


The main character are Ivor, John Farthing and George Crombie. Ivor is the character who dream about the brusting dum and tell about what he dreamt to the constable


John Farthing is the man who discovers details about the dam build and he discover that the dam made from unlegal cement who responsible to one of the bigest disastor in the history


George Crombie is the man who buy the

unlegal cement for the dam building.