Final Assessment

Dear Omer,

You did a nice job on this blog even though a lot of it is from your previous book report (which I said was okay). You really need to work on your grammar and your mechanics (capital letters, punctuation). Maybe write first in a Word document, then copy-paste into the blog. That way you could check your mistakes with spell and grammar check.

Anyway you did a good job and finished all the assignments. i like the picture of the village which shows how much damage was done.

Your final grade is 88.

Yours,

Karen Noll Stanger

Reflection

Did you enjoy this way of doing a book report?1

Do you prefer it to the regular way?2

Was it worthwhile to spend so many lessons on it?3

Did you learn anything from these assignments?4

Do you suggest we continue with this type of learning?5

answers:12345

Yes, I did...better than the normal way

No way, it's more better than writing

For me, it was right, for you i don't know

No, I didn't learn

Yes i am. it's more fun from book report

questions

what was the village's name?

what man was Ivor inthe story (happy,sad)? y

what happened in ivor's dream? 4

what thing did jon farthing read that made him anxious about the dam? 7

what was the connection between George Crombie, David Pliger and william wrangley? 5

why was Richard Jones angry? 4

Why did te two men attack John Farthing in a dark alley? 2

who sent them? 4

what happened to Iver by the end of the story?2

what happened to Crombie and Pliger? 4

who was Reverend Griffiths? 4

where did Ivor go after that night? 4

what was the cement used for the dam? 3

where was the meeting? 4

what happened to the villagers? 3

Enter the book

If I will join to the characters I will take a car to escape from the village. I will take pillow and blanket to sleep, money for food and room away from the dam.

Diray

1935 ,23 September

Dear Diary

 

Approximately one month before the terrible day, the day that the dam burst, I knew  that something terrible was going to happen. Nobody would believe my dream. In the end, I saw it with my own eyes. Today, I am living in Cardiff and I work in a gun factory. I miss all the villagers. One week after the dam burst, I left the village and I never saw them again. Today I am going back to the village, the place where no one believed that something like that could happen.      Maybe, I will find things that I lost there. 

Ivor

the ending

Ivor climbs to the hill with John to see what is happening. He doesn't see anything there, so they go back to the village. When they return to the village, they hear something out there. They go out to see what's happening. They see a big black thing on the dam. They see water coming out from the wall of the dam. Now they know that Ivor's dream has come true. They try to get all the villagers to escape but they don't succeed. The dam bursts and washes all the village away. Everybody dies. Crombie and Pilger escape to China

the plot

My story is about a man who dreams that the dam near his village bursts. A young architect discovers details about the dam and one of them is important: the cement used for the dam's build isn't safe and illegal. After the secret  becomes  known, the architect goes to the village with the man who dreamt about the dam. They save the villagers and the builders go to jail. The climax is when the architect discovers that the cement is illegal and he talks to his boss 

the setting

the village

the main country where the story takes place is England. In two places: a lilttle village in Welsh and big city named Cardiff. the village placed near a big dam.Cardiff is a big city far away from the village.

place 1-the dam. the dam is the main thing in the story. The story is about this object

place 2-the village. where the main characters are living, Ivor and Constable Evans.

place 3-Cardiff city. where the other main characters are living, John Farthing and his boss.

The main character

crombie makes the cement's deal

The main character are Ivor, John Farthing and George Crombie. Ivor is the character who dream about the brusting dum and tell about what he dreamt to the constable

John Farthing is the man who discovers details about the dam build and he discover that the dam made from unlegal cement who responsible to one of the bigest disastor in the history

George Crombie is the man who buy the

unlegal cement for the dam building.

The author

Michael Evans born in 10 August, 1951 in England.

Ordained as a Priest at Southwark on June 22, 1975, Michael Evans spent some time as an assistant priest, then studied for a Master of Theology degree at the University of London for four years (1975 to 1979) subsequently returning to St. John's Seminary for eight years as lecturer in Doctrine.
During his time within the Roman Catholic Church, Bishop Michael has held many and varied posts, ranging from the chaplain of a convent school to chairman of the Archdiocese of Southwark's Justice and Peace Coordinating Committee.
On 14 February 2003 Pope John Paul II appointed Canon Evans as the third Bishop of East Anglia. He succeeded the Most Reverend Peter Smith, who is now Archbishop of Cardiff. Canon Michael was ordained as the third Bishop of East Anglia at the Cathedral Church of St John the Baptist, Norwich on 19 March 2003.
On his appointment as the new bishop, Canon Michael Evans said: 'I was astonished to be appointed as Bishop of East Anglia, and have a real sense of my unworthiness for this responsibility, but I accepted this new ministry with a joyful though nervous 'yes'. I look forward to getting to know the diocesan family of East Anglia, and to working with my brother priests and deacons as a team dedicated to the ministry of Christ. As I prepare for my ordination, I ask everyone to keep me in their prayers. one of his little books is "A Crack in The Dam" which I read.

My blog

My blog is about a book called 'A Crack In The Dam'. It's a book about people that live near a huge dam and with the time mistory things happen with the dam.