1935 ,23 September
Dear Diary
Approximately one month before the terrible day, the day that the dam burst, I knew that something terrible was going to happen. Nobody would believe my dream. In the end, I saw it with my own eyes. Today, I am living in Cardiff and I work in a gun factory. I miss all the villagers. One week after the dam burst, I left the village and I never saw them again. Today I am going back to the village, the place where no one believed that something like that could happen. Maybe, I will find things that I lost there.
Ivor
Nice job! You need some corrections if you have someone who can help you that would be good!
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